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Mon, Jan. 22nd, 2007, 01:27 am
Spiral

Melody in the memory
Thinking for the singing
Drowning in isolated glory

Tell me the ways
Meters of my life,
Rhythms to place,
Tell me how to sing,

Searching, I wander
Down on the beaches,
Feet naked, I wonder

Trees of my words,
Varieties that confound,
In harmony or dissonance?
Rising and falling
They are spiralling

Letters flowering,
Wordplay constant,
Stumping, tricking
Into making same words

Stuffy words,
Aristocratic words,
Dance stiffly.
The melody surround
Spiralling round.

Flowers of music,
Wordly petals,
Falling silently
On the unlearned.


I can't write. God bless me.
And I am motivated enough or lazy enough to go out and copy this over from my last.fm
Cue for the following post on this.

Sun, Jan. 21st, 2007 10:49 pm (UTC)
[info]ipridian

Subjectively, some parts don't blend in much with the general view..

lacks seduction I guess? hm. Or maybe I've been reading too much other things nowadays...

They say at night like 1 am, for words to flow out into a melody, you need 佳餚美酒.

It's not for nothing that they say 寄情詩酒!

Sat, Feb. 3rd, 2007 07:52 pm (UTC)
[info]schlaften

I agree with it... I am still grappling with rhyme and rhythm. they call it the hardest part of a language and i must agree... the stanza on the beach ish kind of offish... and no ipridian. alcohol is not the only source >_>

Sat, Feb. 3rd, 2007 07:56 pm (UTC)
[info]ipridian

practice makes perfection (hopefully). Keep on writing <3

the other source is the opposite sex. :3

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